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Twenty or Less...#20 |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Obliterating margins Obsidian verse Ready To Phrase symbols Across blank edges Savage White pages Challenging My impossible victory (Copyright 2001 by: MARK V SHELDON) "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
YEP... think you have this form well in hand Mark... very well done indeed!! Jet black words painted within margins s l i m defile snow white thoughts yet once A g a i n |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
you make the impossible look quite easy, and I know it is not.... well done Sir! |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Thanks, Ron. I like the contrasting "retort" of your piece -- WITHIN the margins! Nice thought-twist. Decaflame, thank you. It actually becomes much easier if one opens themselves to "triggers"... that way, the piece "writes itself". -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Ever try Microsoft Word? It does all that automatically. Really quite amazing. Puts everything in a neat little box if you wish. But, the again, you really don't want to be IN the box, do you? Of course not  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hm, definitely don't want to be in the box. But where are your thoughts really going with this. I'm unclear. Sandra |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
That's a good one, Interloper! I actually love Word -- great program. And no. Most definitely never want to be trapped in a box -- just aware of it when one exists... Sandra... how about: Writer's block? Or: Cold-calling? Or, perhaps, dealing with Fear? -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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