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Come On Home
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Come On Home |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Come On Home you’ve been wandering way too long time for you to settle down and come on home I’ve waited a lifetime you know it’s true I’m still here believing in you time to be in the arms of trust where I can clean your heart of dust chancing now to right so much wrong back to the place where you belong direction where your magnet draws you to come on home I’m waiting for you "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Ah... nicely done. A plea and a welcome with arms open... very nice... I enjoyed! |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
"time to be in the arms of trust where I can clean your heart of dust" I love these lines. Very sincere offer you have made, all he has to do is "Come On Home". Enjoyed your poem very much! |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
mmmmmm nice.....you know there's a song on the radio with these same sentiments...and when I heard it, it was if it was written for me...I had been wanting to leave home for so long that I was not really there...it was time for me to come home.....great write you have here.....  |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Very soft and warm...enjoyed There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Very Well Done! Thank You |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the feeling of your words always comes through wonderfully helen. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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