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SEA
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0 posted 2001-07-25 09:28 AM


can I have your lips
softly upon skin
touching gently
wending within

~*~

to my soul
passion travel
leave me undone
a slow unravel

~*~

a barely there
glide of kiss
subdued hint
of mouthly bliss

~*~

pouty promises
I’ll make come true
if I can have
one kiss from you


~SEA~



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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2001-07-25 09:31 AM


Sea,
Who does not want to kiss the sea? Enjoyed

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2 posted 2001-07-25 09:46 AM


Sure..anytime! (laughing)

Very nicely done SEA... Enjoyed a great deal!


Upon my lips
a taste of sea
when tongue does
wet them now,
and then the sun
to softly warm
the heart of you
as only it knows how.

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3 posted 2001-07-25 09:52 AM



Isn't your spouse just the luckiest man alive?....

you're so charming when you pen little gems like these....

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4 posted 2001-07-25 09:55 AM


thank you Seymour  

Ron, that is great, thanks  

Deca~ I read this to him last night....I got my kiss   thank you  

~SEA

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5 posted 2001-07-25 10:04 AM


Dear Sea.
Your heart it burns with passion true, so all you wish should come to you. Make your wish and don't despair, I'm sure by two they'll all be there.

Nice read Sea.

Rick

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6 posted 2001-07-25 02:21 PM



Susan ~ This has a wonderful flow to it, and of course, it's exuberantly passionate  

Melissa~

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7 posted 2001-07-25 02:21 PM


mmmmmmmmmmmm oh how I love this *big big smile*
cpalmer
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8 posted 2001-07-25 02:29 PM


I love the flow of this, very easy to read....much meaning to it too!  well done!
Cindi

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9 posted 2001-07-25 02:33 PM


Oh my Sea....I forgot about your naughty side. LOL. Great read.  
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10 posted 2001-07-25 03:04 PM


Lovely  

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
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Rick~ that was wonderful, thank you  

Melissa~   thank you  

Jellybeans~ Big, big smiles right back to ya   thank you

Cindi~ thank you very much  

Marilyn~ LOL...it's always there...just under my skin   LOL...thank you  

~SEA

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12 posted 2001-07-25 03:06 PM


thank you Jamie  
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13 posted 2001-07-25 03:06 PM


Sometimes the anticipation can be unbearable...very nicely done!  
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14 posted 2001-07-25 04:19 PM


Soft, gentle kisses -----hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm the kind that are hard to forget.  Very nice.
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15 posted 2001-07-25 05:13 PM


Susan,

Your husband must adore these wonderfully romantic poems of yours.  Truly enjoyed this. (((hugs)))

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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16 posted 2001-07-25 06:12 PM


Ah Sea, that is what makes you so special!  

~ Give the heavens above more than just a passing glance ~And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance ~ I hope you dance. (Lee Ann Womack)

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17 posted 2001-07-25 07:15 PM


Just beautiful!
Elizabeth Santos
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18 posted 2001-07-25 07:38 PM


Inspired by sensuous thought and written as the vision unfolded
Lovely
Liz.

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19 posted 2001-07-25 07:42 PM


I love as the more sultry, seductive side of you comes out SEA. . . it makes for great poetry. . .

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20 posted 2001-07-25 08:43 PM


Mmm, delicious little poem, sure does make kissing sound wonderful. May have to take it up again..
Sandra

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21 posted 2001-07-26 08:17 AM


One word for you....wow.
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22 posted 2001-07-27 11:55 AM


Ooooooooooooops, almost missed this one.  Pucker up, gal  


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth
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23 posted 2001-07-27 12:35 PM


hehe, sweet    I don't doubt you get said kisses often!
~Krista  

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

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24 posted 2001-07-27 12:37 PM


sea

oh i really like
this, you express the
magic of a kiss
so well

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