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heart_of_the_ocean
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since 2001-07-25
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0 posted 2001-07-25 06:30 AM


Hear my cry,
in my hunger in search for you,
taste my breath on the wind..

See the sky,
as it mirrors my colors,
hind, and whispers begin..

Iam living to nourish you,
cherish you,
i am pulsing the blood in your veins.

Every finger,
is touching, serching,
until your secrets come out..

Hear the dark side,
as it endlessly circles,
i linger close to your mouth.

Iam living to nourish you,
cherish you,
i am pulsing the blood in your veins.


what do u think guys???

© Copyright 2001 heart_of_the_ocean - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-07-25 08:37 AM


welcome... I think I enjoy poetry, is what I think..( grinning)


Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2001-07-25 08:39 AM



Welcome to Passions! A good entrance to what we hope will become a new poet's home for your writings!  Please, check your e-mail for a special greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




cpalmer
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since 2001-06-26
Posts 977
Phoenix, Az
3 posted 2001-07-25 12:27 PM


Welcome to passions...you will like it here!   I like the poem!
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
4 posted 2001-07-25 02:17 PM


to Passions!

This was a very interesting read, you express your emotions well.

I look forward to more poetry by you  

Take care,
Melissa~

Sven
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since 1999-11-23
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East Lansing, MI USA
5 posted 2001-07-25 07:58 PM


I think that I like it. . .  

wonderful. . . welcome to Passions. . . please feel free to look around. . . and we look forward to reading more from you. . .

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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

6 posted 2001-07-25 08:12 PM


Add my name to the Welcome list...  
your gonna love it here in Poetry Land
your poetic name is cool
take care
jm

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