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Love-fool
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Love-fool |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Love-Fool In days gone of you; I look back to picnic rugs seasides and coffee shops. I see you there almost perfect with the straightness of your smile your eyes to the sky all flighty and fickle: and There I am flowing on a string in the wind, flapping carelessly like those clowns with stars in their eyes, love-sick complexions and decorated lips: tasting the sand. "little miss understood little misunderstood" ~Marry me Jane~ [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 07-25-2001).] |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Wow...very powerful! Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Like this very much, keeps me searching for more meanings... I like when I have to think  Thank you  Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
There I am flowing on a string in the wind, flapping carelessly like those clowns with stars in their eyes, love-sick complexions and decorated lips: Very very good... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree--Very original and colorful use of words. This is great writing, my friend...the feeling comes through even though not stated. Hugs! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow, Maree, you express yourself so uniquely and powerfully in this, well penned! Melissa~ |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
I can actually feel this one Mmy. To me, it is one of your best. Satpsych.  There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
I enjoyed the images here and the colorful expressions...well done! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Cindi, Thank you for the "Wow" Thunderkyss, I like it when I haveto think too Thank you, so glad you liked Cpat, I thank you for your kind reply Martie, thank you for your always lovely replies. You are so kind. I HUG you back Melissa, thank you very very much Jamie, I believe you can. Glad you liked. Thank you for your lovely reply Dulcinea, thank you for your lovely reply Thank you all again Maree. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
It reminds me of the clowns in It and I love it yuh |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
I felt as though I was there...what a wonderful write! Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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