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wandering glider
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aloft

0 posted 2001-07-25 12:52 PM



Be Kind Enough


Who am I?
you ask
hell, I’ve been asking myself that
all of my life
Do you know
Do you know something?
If you do
be kind enough to tell me
Am I a career
a mate of some sort
a model to sculpt
an object to photograph
Did I miss my turn
miss the train?
I am so much less now
than I once was
no doubt escapes me
no failure is unattainable
Who am I
you ask
Do you know?
be kind enough to tell me

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Voiceless
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since 2001-02-19
Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind
1 posted 2001-07-25 01:06 AM


I ask the same question
about every other day of my life!
I doubt I will find the answer right
away, but trying out the posibilites
sure is fun!
So how is it going?
It's going pretty good here.
Just thought I would share that
with you.
So yeah!
Great poem, great message!

~*Freedom Is Not Free*~ (Korean War Memorial)

cpalmer
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since 2001-06-26
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2 posted 2001-07-25 01:06 AM


You are a great poet!
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2001-07-25 08:46 AM


I enjoyed...
wandering glider
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4 posted 2001-07-25 01:44 PM


Voiceless:
Some are cursed to ponder this Q forever, others find a road to follow...
Thanks for reading.
cpalmer:
I think you overstate the case a bit, but thanks, I'm flattered!
Cpat Hair:
Glad you enjoyed.  Thanks for stopping by.
        

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Interloper
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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2001-07-26 01:48 PM


who am I you ask
you are what you speak and live
no escaping that

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth
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wandering glider
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6 posted 2001-07-26 02:22 PM


Interloper,
True enough, no escaping that.
But in asking for a response to the introspective question, it becomes also, comparative.
Thanks for your comment.
        

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