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walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-07-24 07:05 PM

The rains came swiftly
they overpowered me
I gave in
and succumbed to
everything you wished
That's my sin
Pleasing you endlessly
Never thinking that
if you had everything
there was nothing more
for me to give.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2001-07-24 07:15 PM

Many times I have felt like I was giving too much and not returning very much in return...definately not a good relationship...but then I think how can they give when they don't have the feelings...as I began to lose mine...James

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

2 posted 2001-07-24 09:45 PM

Oh, I hope there's more, and I hope you receive something more special than ever.

Thank you for sharing.
Sincerely,
Rwood

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2001-07-24 09:50 PM

somtimes things can certainly feel that way, you may just need a break

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

4 posted 2001-07-24 10:40 PM

I also know that feeling of helplessness that comes with the emptiness of having nothing left to give...very well done!

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

5 posted 2001-07-25 12:09 PM

Great write, walker...no advice from me, though. That would be just too bizarre!

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

6 posted 2001-07-25 05:44 AM

Boy can I relate to THIS!

" I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis"

Kathleen

Ethan Halo
Senior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

7 posted 2001-07-25 06:52 AM

i can only think of a quote a galpal wrote in my yearbook...

"the key to life is falling in love with the same person over and over again."

there's never a time when the well runs dry, ya dig?
MHO...

the Bar is always open.
the Time is always right.
if god's lovin Word goes unspoken,
the Music goes all night.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

8 posted 2001-07-26 01:34 PM

Wise words for a relationship that does not include true love. If the love were indeed true you would never run out of offerings that she would revel in receiving whether they be words or actions.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth
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kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

9 posted 2001-08-01 04:44 AM

no words of wisdom from me but just thought i would say that i related...

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2001-08-01 10:15 AM

enjoy

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