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Trina
Member
since 2001-06-28
Posts 97


0 posted 2001-07-24 05:51 PM


Left your son and wife
with no money in their
pockets
freezing and starving
to death
how cold can you be?

Ran off with another
woman, who wasn't worth
what you left behind
and gives no love like
your wife once did
how cold can you be?

Life wasted on nothing,
you've gained not a damn thing
but a good late night ****
and a few broken bones from other
guys
is it worth it?

Is life that much better
then what you had,
then what you've always
wanted?
when once a little boy
you couldn't have desired this

Now a days you can't
and won't even try to keep
that clean cut look you once
had
you gave up on your family
then you gave up on yourself

Came this close to ending
your life and you know exactly why,
life ain't all that good anymore
and you finally woke up
to your wasted lifetime
all I can say is
how stupid could you be?

© Copyright 2001 Trina - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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Member Patricius
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-07-24 06:01 PM


strong words... and sounds like alot of wrong decisions... painful read..but well expressed...
hang in there...


shadow974
Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636
Michigan
2 posted 2001-07-24 06:27 PM


Lots of feeling in this, Someone got burned big time. It's a sad statement for some of the men in this world. My heart goes out to his family.

Do not fear going forward slowly,
Fear only standing still.

Trina
Member
since 2001-06-28
Posts 97

3 posted 2001-07-24 06:37 PM


Thank you both for reading. Your comments are greatly appreciated.

Take care,

Trina

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