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Us - Senryu
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Us in a turn I turned catching your glimpse in my eye rebounding we are ~*~ in her spurn you learned where your heart had left its sigh rebounding we are ~*~ I caught your glimpsing as you were reminiscing rebounding on we |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
well-written but rebounding is scarey, isn't it |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I would agree.... rebounding is not always a good thing.. I like the poems though... they fit well in the set... and play nicely on the words.. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Hmmmmmmmmm, rebounding ... This requires comtemplation. Loved the write and enjoyed the read. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyInWhite~ I like rebounding ... gives one a chance to catch what someone else missed !  Very nicely done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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