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Passing Clouds |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I cared not That this drift Of cloud passed Over my shadow Making it just A few shades harder To see and understand Those moments Lasted less than more Still the shading From intensely burning Eyes of Soul Were relief [This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (edited 07-24-2001).] |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Wow, this ones very good. Releaf for the soul. Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
play on words sublime read again to take up time splendid then combines [This message has been edited by Lady In White (edited 07-24-2001).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Those moments Lasted less than more" I like the way that sounds.....  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Relief is just ... a swallow away. I never could figger out whut birds had to do with relief Iz there such a thang as sunglasses for the soul? Seriously, you're right, we cannot escape our own scrutiny ... Well writ my friend |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Nicely done! relief comes in mysterious ways. Love this! Sincerely, Rwood |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
a fascinating piece cloudy need some eye drops? |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Still the shading From intensely burning Eyes of Soul Were relief A thought-provoking passage, Ron. Whose eyes? Relief from Fear or from judgement or simple passionate intensity (or all that and more...?) -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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