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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-07-24 03:54 PM


Screams of passion
Echo in the wind
As we partake
Of each other
Beneath the stars.
Restful snuggles,
Whispering,
Yet there are no ears to hear.
Total unselfishness,
One to the other.
Will it last?



Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth
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SEA
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1 posted 2001-07-24 03:57 PM


will it last?
retouch and see
restir these feelings
inside of me..........

Lady In White
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2 posted 2001-07-24 03:59 PM



Oh my....I do think it would....

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3 posted 2001-07-24 04:08 PM


good question...

and very nicely done!

Between the stars
and this earth we share
I floated on the lift
of care



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4 posted 2001-07-24 04:20 PM


SEA ~ There you go, gal, back to that ole 4-5-4 format ... the SEAryu

soft touch offered
old emotions stir
sensational

Lady ~ I do, too

Ron ~
Heavenly bodies glow
as we entwine
and in ardor show
our glistening
bodies shine

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth
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5 posted 2001-07-24 04:27 PM


with just your touch
I let myself go
falling again......

shadow974
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6 posted 2001-07-24 04:28 PM


Very nicely done, For some it does last. Those stars I remember were beautiful.

Do not fear going forward slowly,
Fear only standing still.

Interloper
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7 posted 2001-07-24 04:34 PM



SEA ~
tactile mapping
tracing your contours
memorizing

Shadow ~ Yes, they were:

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth
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8 posted 2001-07-24 04:53 PM


surely so, surely so!

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9 posted 2001-07-24 05:20 PM


leaving bread crumbs
for you to follow
relish the trail.......

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10 posted 2001-07-24 06:45 PM


VAS ~ Surely?  I thought your name was Virginia ....

SEA ~
the trailblazer
eagerly follows
expectantly

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth
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11 posted 2001-08-14 03:30 AM


Hiya InterLoper, my goodness I really liked this poem and I gotta tell ya something else that your replies to our PoetFriends are absolutely awesome...

I adore reading these lil poems you reply and post they're sooooooooo cool, and maybe one day I'll learn how to write in that kinda format cuz it sure looks like I'd have a blast...

Hugs2UpoetFriend
*~coco~*

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