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PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20
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0 posted 2001-07-24 12:23 PM


Take me, I’m yours
Drown me in the deep
Love you have to give,
And forever to keep
There’s always a Heaven
Every time, in your kiss
So anoint me with lips
In which I wish to kiss

Take me now
I give myself to you
Do what you want
Anything you want to
Breathe your love into me
Go ahead and touch
With hands that know,
And a heart that loves so much

You give beauty a voice
And sweep me away
Never to be blinded again
By the light of day
Eternal, like waves upon the water
Like wind across the ocean
Such is the thought of you,
And the love that I am in

Take me once,
Like only you can do
Take me twice,
I give myself to you



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SEA
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with you
1 posted 2001-07-24 12:45 PM


a perfect example of one I wish I wrote...........*SIGH*   beautiful

"Four be the things I'd been better without: Love, curiosity, freckles and doubt."
-- Dorothy Parker, on herself

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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-07-24 01:08 PM


Take me, I’m yours
Drown me in the deep
Love you have to give,
And forever to keep
There’s always a Heaven
Every time, in your kiss
So anoint me with lips
In which I wish to kiss
==============================
Breathe your love into me
Go ahead and touch
With hands that know,
And a heart that loves so much

You give beauty a voice
And sweep me away
Never to be blinded again
By the light of day
Eternal, like waves upon the water
Like wind across the ocean
Such is the thought of you,
And the love that I am in
============================
Take me twice,
I give myself to you
==========================

Are you trying to start a riot? *L*  
Have mercy on us moths PK...
man oh man do I love when you write like this *S*
Beautiful, excellence from your pen.


Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635

3 posted 2001-07-24 01:22 PM



You are away so long, then come back with promises like this...

flirt!

[love it!]

Promise?

walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida
4 posted 2001-07-24 06:52 PM


Beautifully expressed!
Interloper
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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2001-07-24 06:55 PM


Take me once and take me twice and take me once again, it's been a long, long time.  Never felt like this before since can't remember when, it's been a long, long time.
*Apologies*

snowpants
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6 posted 2001-07-24 07:04 PM


'Anything you want to
Breathe your love into me
Go ahead and touch
With hands that know,
And a heart that loves so much

You give beauty a voice
And sweep me away'

Outrageous write, PK...excellently expressed emotions and very gentle rhymes that flow perfectly...I truly enjoyed this!

sp  

it was love that first drew me,
it is love that will keep me here...
now I see love burning brightly
when everything else is unclear...

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2001-07-24 07:12 PM


Aha...wonderful romantic expression...James
Sven
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8 posted 2001-07-24 07:14 PM


Your voice continues to sing the songs that I need to hear. . .

excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

vandana
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9 posted 2001-07-25 11:03 AM


enjoy
Honeybee
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Ontario, CANADA
10 posted 2001-08-04 08:24 PM



Ooooh, I love this!  

Erotically beautiful, well expressed.  Into my library this goes~

Melissa~

ShannonM
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since 2001-07-28
Posts 104
Drifitng
11 posted 2001-08-04 10:44 PM


Beautiful expression of surrendering yourself and your heart.

ShannonM

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