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Heartbeats |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii 
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 An eternity of neverending dream. The rapture in your eyes as lovelights gleam In ethereal mists of my searching mind, That deep place within me; you determined to find. My beating heart, pounding like a drum, Wild electric beat within me thrums. The secret places of my body untouched, Soon to be discovered that I need you so much Two hearts beating wild and flying free, This burning heat of passion between you and me. Abandoned in the moment, our ardor alflame And to these burning fires I must give only one name: Love....... [This message has been edited by KokoStewartKoomoa (edited 07-24-2001).] |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
This heartbeat is just that....well done! [This message has been edited by Decaflame (edited 07-25-2001).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is fantastic.....  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KoKo~ Such a sincerely romantic piece. Truly lovely~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Koko, Love is the magic of the mind with overtones. Enjoyed |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
oh, my and another Koko in the same morning, and so lovely of illustration and write enjoyed! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
girlie.......love is mostly the reason that our heartbeat drums like crazy....Great Love Poem...  (((hugs)) Charisma |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
This one drips of romance, very nicely done. Your words paint a picture of what can't be seen. Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Cherie, this is just so lovely  Melissa~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice expression of the feelings associated with love...James |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
desirable thoughts fond memories rekindled passion unharnessed Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Koko, This is an exquiste poem of love and its heart pounding excitement. This is a very moving read. Thanks for sharing your magic. Peace and good health, Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
It is SO good to read your words again, you have been sorely missed! " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautifully descriptive Koko, and lovely phrasing ... I really enjoyed the passion and heart in this wonderful piece. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
awesome this one tells the story of true love a great read |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
She's baccccckkkk, and in fine form too, this was awesome my friend (sorry I am late)! ~ Give the heavens above more than just a passing glance ~And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance ~ I hope you dance. (Lee Ann Womack) |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
yeah ...back..a little maybe...thanks so much to all..love to u all.I am only kinda back I guess and it is a struggleing experience. Tanks for enjoying my heartbeat! Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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