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mpt
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0 posted 2001-07-24 11:16 AM


someone to hold, someone to touch
someone to be with, feel the rush
a familiarity of ages, a new smile every day
a person whos everything, in every possible way
where is this woman, why cant she be mine?
ive been waiting so long, am i next in line?
i see her around the corner, i see her around the way
i see her everywhere i go, every single day
but she doesnt see me, not even a look
which is why i put my loneliness, inside this book
but my quest must continue, to find my special one
so now i must leave you, it surely has been fun

Though dreams can be deceiving
Like faces are to hearts
They serve for sweet relieving
When fantasy and reality lie too far apart
- Fiona Apple

© Copyright 2001 matt howe (mpt) - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-07-24 11:22 AM


ah the search... hope you find what you are looking for...

nicely done

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2 posted 2001-07-24 11:27 AM



"someone to hold, someone to touch
someone to be with, feel the rush
a familiarity of ages, a new smile every day
a person whos everything, in every possible way"

I liked the sweetness of this  

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3 posted 2001-07-24 12:32 PM


MPT~
I like this line -

'a familiarity of ages, a new smile every day'

Symbolic to me of having known one
beyond the pathway we walk today~

Enjoyed~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                 noles1@totcon.com              

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2001-07-24 05:29 PM


Enjoyed reading your poem...like the title...have hope because many women are looking for someone to hold also...James
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