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KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

0 posted 2001-07-24 11:15 AM

Alabaster glow
inviting pale moonlight
she wears nothing more.

Aloha with warmest regards, Koko
Please Visit my new web-page
http://www.koko-stewart-koomoa.cityslide.com/contents/contents.cfm/190111

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-07-24 11:19 AM

Koko!

this is sooooooooo pretty

wonderfully done

(nice to see you posting)

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

2 posted 2001-07-24 11:29 AM

Koko! Welcome home...this is so beautifully simple.....

thank you for sharing....

KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

3 posted 2001-07-24 11:35 AM

Big smiles and thanks! I am feeling quite welcomed back to the people who are so wonderful in their poety and their hearts as well as their writings!. My love to you all here. Thanks for reading and commenting on this haiku.(my favorite form of poetry

Aloha, my friends!

Aloha with warmest regards, Koko
Please Visit my new web-page http://www.koko-stewart-koomoa.cityslide.com/contents/contents.cfm/190111

[This message has been edited by KokoStewartKoomoa (edited 07-24-2001).]

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

4 posted 2001-07-24 05:49 PM

Cherie, this is so well penned, gorgeous expression here - especially the last line. I love it, it's a keeper

Melissa~

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2001-07-24 05:52 PM

My first time to see you post. You write in my favorite style ... Haiku/Senryu/Tanka. I love it

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth
http://members.home.net/excalibur2501/Interloper.htm

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 07-24-2001).]

Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

6 posted 2001-07-24 09:25 PM

Koko,
Lovely haiku in simple terms, less is more! Well Done! Peace, Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

7 posted 2001-07-25 01:10 AM

Beautiful!!!!!!!!!

Charisma

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