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Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

0 posted 2001-07-24 11:02 AM

2:45 A.M. Serenade

rumbling stumbled
onto glass panes
crashed along
in the wake
of striking

I ticked off the
seconds
rolling with
the rumble again

my Muse, amused,
and thus enthused
started harking
on sounds of sparking
with her 2:45 serenade

she briefly
kicked me around
and I thought it sound
to reach and stretch for pad
and pen

but
I rolled into you again
held on to you again
as your whispering
led me in

Muse hiked....

I lolled
within your quietness
held you warm between caress
then led you along in some
confess

for we never see us in a mess
nor claim we're under any
duress

then
found again
some sleeping time
until the 4:45 cannon
primed

rumbling stumbled
onto glass panes
crashed along
in the wake
of striking

rolling with
the rumble again

thinking of all
that had been before
I reached
and found dreams
amour

your place empty
as were my arms

thunder's alarm brought
me to full awake

my Muse hiked
on back to me,
for having dreamed
of only you
and in the grasp
of certainty
I,
left alone,
but for Muse
and me

~*~

with much thanks to my Muse for never quite leaving me entirely alone....

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-07-24 11:08 AM

Quite the tune it seems
was sung to you in your dreams
still in all the muse does find
most fertile ground in your mind

Nicely done.. I enjoyed!

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-07-24 11:24 AM

wow! WOW!

I love this

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2001-07-24 12:04 PM

Deca...you may sleep, but your flame seems to glow all night. I repeat Sea's wow!!

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

4 posted 2001-07-24 12:07 PM

Very very interesting and colorful use of words. Loved this.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2001-07-24 01:15 PM

Decaflame-
   At the risk of sounding unoriginal, WOW!
   This is awesome!  I LOVE THIS!!
   Wonderfully done..

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2001-07-24 01:23 PM

Decalfame,
A muse, is a muse, is a muse. Enjoyed

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2001-07-24 06:43 PM

Interesting tale, much enjoyed.
Sandra

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

8 posted 2001-07-24 06:50 PM

In your case, a wise muse

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

9 posted 2001-07-24 07:51 PM

we all have those times it seems, as I was up then also, only my muse went to sleep...very gentle smile..

Mike
Member Elite

since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

10 posted 2001-07-24 10:49 PM

interesting read, enjoyed.

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