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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
The journey home frought with peril speculation, misgivings has taken lightyears to accomplish your arms open to recieve me but I find my place occupied by another you say, "this spot is just as choice as the other" but I cannot accept anything less than promised If I must go this time, know that I will not return I shall make the journey past the moon in search of a dream once called Jupiter... ~Tier 6/00 |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Well now RT... this one seems indeed to be part of something..perhaps one of the series you have done? I enjoyed!! as usual.. but can feel like there is so much more to the story and knowing you... figure you have written it. (smile) |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
*chuckles* No,Captain, no story written for this at all. Rather, this poem is symbolic of events in my life. Also, the date's all wrong. I wrote this today. Silly me! :-) ~Tier |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah well.. then you should write more..and weave it into one of the series you do so well... for it is a gem... How is the weather on Jupiter these days anyway? ( grinning) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Personally my friend. . . I don't see how your place can be occupied by another. . . surely the place that you're going back to has always been waiting for one such as you. . .  Wonderful from your heart. . . good to see you again. . . ----------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Excellent writing Tier...James |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'but I cannot accept anything less than promised If I must go this time, know that I will not return I shall make the journey past the moon in search of a dream once called Jupiter...' Hey Tier...great title for this...excellently descriptive write...I love it! sp  it was love that first drew me, |
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