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A Summer Evening
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A Summer Evening |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii 
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oceanic moonbeams dancing on whispering waves kiss upon the shore sweet fragrant tradewinds caress romantic summer evening Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Koko, I'll go for a cup of that. Lovely enjoyed |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
smiles and thank you so very much for the sweet remarks. aloha!, Koko  Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
how I love such wonderful summer evenings....love it Koko. Charisma |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
sounds exceptionally nice.. and nicely presented as well... I enjoyed |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Ordinarily, I like to do graphics with my poem. This was a bit bare! LOL Thanks to all fo the reading and comments of my tanka...I wrote this on a whim for someone who also write haiku style..just as a response to one he did. Thanks! Dennis! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KoKo~ Your words created such a beautiful picture in my mind~ Good to see you.  This is a lovely piece. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Cherie~ What a beautiful tanka! It's good to read your words again~Melissa~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
absolutely lovely!!! so good to see you here! I've not noticed some by you lately, it may be my timing, but I'm so happy I didn't miss this peaceful interlude |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
lovin this Koko..... so happy you are posting again! |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
A wonderfully refreshing and relaxing experience in poetry. -Bob |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Very romantic, wispering waves, Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Koko, This is SWEET! The ocean, scented tradewinds and moonbeams on a summers night, a wining combination for sure! WRITE ON GIRL! Peace unto you my friend, Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Koko honey, yours are about the only haiku, tanka and senryu that do never need "lights, camera and action" for they stand on a stage all their own! Missed you and glad your words are back, these were lovely! ~ Give the heavens above more than just a passing glance ~And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance ~ I hope you dance. (Lee Ann Womack) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Tanka you for this beautiful work Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"oceanic moonbeams." Lovely, lovely creative writing...James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I love this!!! *sigh*. . . "oceanic moonbeams". . . I'd kill to see those. . . wonderful Koko!! ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
wonderful to read your words! This is so refreshing and vibrant, hope you are doing well! " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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