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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Dilemma My heart is gone from here yet I cannot seem to leave it’s an old pattern not one I always admit to I hate change truly detest movement from my norm a set schedule routine order reason accountability all is gone from here yet I cannot seem to leave what would I do with the time walk the dog do the dishes make a phone call write a real letter sit outside by the fire go out with friends hear some music dance until the band grew numb lie in a bath surrounded by candles read Zola until my eyes burned drive country roads with the top down inhale midnight’s cool air watch late night TV go to sleep before two wake up early and wonder what will I do with the time. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nice... captures a passing of time and ideas..leaving us to ponder how we spend our time as well.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JLR, Amusing enjoyed the read. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Love this one. Change is inevitable, we evolve with time regardless of our wants. That's our humanity.  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sounds like a plan to me! Sandra |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
i can certainly relate to this one! and when each day is done, since it was the first one of the rest of my life, why is it over with little accomplished...because I'm spending time spending it heh heh an acquaintance of mine made the remark yesterday, that even on days she loafs, she gets an early start [This message has been edited by VAS (edited 07-24-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
My heart is gone from here yet I cannot seem to leave ============================= Oh my...it WAS you in the mirror ...  damn, those two lines just lift of the page at me. one day at a time...thats what they keep telling us ...some days seem much too long. thought provoking write JLR... thanks, take care jm only you could give love that satisfies the soul... |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Cpat Hair---Thank you for thinking about what I have written and rescuing me from midmorning oblivion. Seymour Tabin---Thanks, I appreciate your response. walker---Love the smiley. Always appreciate the short, direct speeches! Ha! catalinamoon---Now to put it into action...or not. Thanks. VAS---You crack me up...thank you! JM---One day at a time...saw through that one first 24 hours, back before the days got so long. Glad you recognise me. Thank you. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Time ... a friend if used wisely and an enemy if wasted. Well done. [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 07-26-2001).] |
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