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thecraig
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since 2001-03-11
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0 posted 2001-07-23 11:25 PM



Sifting memories,
delusions strong

awakened symbols

changing songs

pattern follow

hidden rays

streaming thoughts

altered ways;

  

While the power shifts

tact's manoeuvre gentle,

concentrate activity mental;

  

Learn with delicate ease,

magic riding upon the breeze,

& with each natural breath intake,

separate the real from the fake;

Place the truth

right up front

give solid answers

quick & blunt;

  

Please time decisions through each quest,

with foundation sprung from stringent test;

© Copyright 2001 Craig Poole - All Rights Reserved
Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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1 posted 2001-07-23 11:32 PM


Wonderfully written and thoroughly enjoyed.
Take care......Sue

Suetang

Titia Geertman
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2 posted 2001-07-25 08:18 PM


I like this, I really do.

Titia

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Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2001-07-26 08:45 AM


Yep..nicely done..like the flow and sounds of this.. they surround the subject itself it seems..

I enjoyed

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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2001-07-27 11:58 AM


Very well done.  The finale not as powerful as the rest, but a good piece indeed

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth
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