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So I Care...gentle smile
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So I Care...gentle smile |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
No I won’t leave you alone, I don’t care if you cry and moan. For a poem from you, for all see, is all that matters at all to me. Bring that muse from vacation back, for the lazy thing has been too slack. I know that you have locked so much inside, Here is the key you tried to hide. I found it rusting by the gate, so I cleaned it up before too late. I oiled it carefully for you to use, and giving it to you instead of that muse. I want to hear what you have to say, for your flowing words would make my day. Don’t throw you hands up so high, all that does is make me sigh. So unless you want me to bug you to death, pen some words to make me hold my breath. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Logan, I don't know who this is for, but it would surely inspire me to get writing again. Very sweet, too. Sandra |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
OH...so you HAVE met my muse  Well I like your approach on this one... (though I am still glowing from the wolfs words) Some muses just need a good swift kick in the pants LOL Im gonna kick mine...I mean KISS mine when she strolls home Anyone ever tell ya that youre cool?? |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
logan This was nothing short of wonderful as your writing captured me with such exquisite imagery and such heartfelt words. Thank you. Take care....Sue Suetang |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Sandra, we all get inspired one way or another..thank you for being here, you are very kind, very gentle smile Ahh, Janet Marie, I wouldn't be surprised if she smelled like smoke when she shows, very gentle smile. obtw, nice kid, drives a hard bargain also, but it was worth it..must be hanging out with this one mentioned, hmm, naw, they couldn't be twins..glad you are here, poetess..gentle smile Sue, you always say the kindest things, which I appreciate so very much..very gentle smile. Thank you for being here |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Yeah yeah..LOL! Ever feel like a poem is written especially for you? So...okay! LOL! Maybe I should write again soon! Cute poem, Sweet One. Your gentle wit shows within it! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
heh heh heh...and I don't care if it's not for me....I'll just put on my Jack Nicholson shades and pretend...  oh...and sweet lil huggies too? |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Logan, your poem is very touching. Trying to help others get back in the swing of things. I'll bet it helped. How could it have done anything but help Thank you Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Every poet here is going to say "this is for me....he wrote this for me...." and print it off and put it in that special Keeper place...a binder, a folder, a box of Keepers and it will always remain at the top, with the golden key glistening.... calling to the Muse.... and promising their heart that they will pen one back, just for you.... |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
A word as important as the thoughts behind this poem -- care. You fill this word with meaning, Logan, and it comes across in your writings and replies. Congradulations on the positive ripple you've started. -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mark said it so well, Logan...your care is showing...and it looks good on you...thanks. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
This is really cool, Logan. I know there are poets words I miss here. Enjoyed this a lot! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well now, and I too thought it was for me! Nicely done and very clever of you Logan, got us all wondering now haven't you, hmmm! lol! ~ Give the heavens above more than just a passing glance ~And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance ~ I hope you dance. (Lee Ann Womack) |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've touched a lot of writers with this lovely piece Logan. You've captured the want and need for return very nicely in this piece, well done! I do hope all of these muses will return from vacation soon.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
now we know you care your thoughts writ for all to share others might not dare I know a senryu shouldn't rhyme, but what the hey... Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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