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Loving Breeze
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Loving Breeze |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
The morning breeze came to me, sighing words of love so tenderly. Filling my heart in morning start, regretting the time we spend apart. Closing my eyes, I can see your fair, with your soft smile and tumbled hair. Slowly I start to make my day, willing your image to be and stay. The breeze stays close to touch my cheek taking my soul in silent keep. After a while it passes by wrapping in swirls, lifting high in the sky Worried not, that it was gone, for it carried to you a melodious song. A melody so sweet to make you smile, promising we’d meet in only a while. The scent of honey returned in the air, gently bringing a kiss, saying you’d be there. Back and froth the breeze would blow, sighing with remorse at the day so slow. Touches of lips and side of face, the breeze did carry in silent race Finally the day was over and done then back together we finally did come |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You know what I like about this...that you had "that"...something precious...something tender....something forever, for it brings us "this"... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Everything about this is beautiful. Sandra |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Oh, the anticipation of love...wonderful express of this feeling, Logan...very beautiful piece... sp  it was love that first drew me, |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
logan This was such an uplifting piece of writing that really brightened up my day. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Logan~ Tender and lovingly done. 'Worried not, that it was gone, for it carried to you a melodious song.' My turn to send a 'gentle smile'. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Ahhh..Logan! You knew I wouldn't be able to resist showing you how much you inspire me, eh!  This one may get a life of its own soon! ((HUGS))  When the breeze kissed her cheek with song, She turned her head and followed along. With happy tears she turned her cheek, And then her lips that breeze did seek. Honey tasted but never taken, For sake of the sheild not forsaken. Duty bound, a warrior he Fallen royalty, a princess, she. Both were warmed by fire's light, Of wrathful moods she had no fright. Here is the tale of a maiden fair, Whose gentle warrior kissed by air. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Logan- This is such a soft and tender write.. Beautifully done.. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 07-24-2001).] |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Gentlely beautiful. She dances on the wind. Memories that warm the heart until she returns. Do not fear going forward slowly, Fear only standing still. [This message has been edited by shadow974 (edited 07-24-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is beautiful Logan. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Soft, gentile, and so very beautiful. Your poem reads like a caress... than you for sharing, Logan *smiles* ~Tier |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes..this is lovely... so nicely done and said.. I enjoyed |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Getting back together is so much fun |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Pleasant and tender, Logan. -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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