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Ruined Art
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Ruined Art |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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His paintings grow more tragic as he goes from red to blue no longer painting magic just a jagged bitter hue. A morbid blackened canvas with a painted over smile splattered shades of former bliss so bereft, all gone awhile. Dripping vagrant thoughts remain refusing to be covered added black and purple stain twisted intent still hovered. Still he paints away his fear while discounting falling tears. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, and how could he not do so? What is inside has to come out, regardless of the emotions of the time...nice write Sandra..very gentle smile |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'His paintings grow more tragic as he goes from red to blue no longer painting magic just a jagged bitter hue.' Very good images, Sandra...nicely written poem...I like it a lot! sp  it was love that first drew me, |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
nicely penned, sets a very effective mood. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
you captured his moods very well as I can feel it by your words. Like it very much Charisma |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CatalinaMoon~ Oh, my ... how vividly portrayed. Very, very nicely done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
What a painting you have displayed for us...nicely done |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
catalinamoon- Wow...you've portrayed this perfectly! Beautifully done..  hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Could it be that he misplaced the vibrant source of color that added the life to his paintings, and his soul? I think maybe... Wonderful depiction of a lost artist, sis... The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
This is a clever write Sandra... wonderful employ of imagery and color to express and portray the emotions... and your cadence was perfect. well done jm only you could give love that satisfies the soul... |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sandra, wow! This is excellent |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Dripping vagrant thoughts remain ============= Wonderful write. Surely your art is not ruined |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
nicely done sandra..i wonder who inspired this one *wink* ~Victoria~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ah yes. . . to be an artist. . . and release all emotions without regard for them. . . wonderful my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Just - Wow! ~ Give the heavens above more than just a passing glance ~And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance ~ I hope you dance. (Lee Ann Womack) |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
You prove the point, cat. A poem can be as vivid as a painting! Well done! \\ |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
(Art is never ruined -- it just looks different...) -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Dark and brooding! Corinne |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, "Ruined Art" is only your view on this subject. To a Prince, he would give you the masterpiece you deserve. Great write. KTDA... Love, Elise |
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