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Love Down
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Love Down |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Love down, a new word used. I liked that word. Not a broken heart, just love down... Made sense to me. Heartbroken, how can a heart be broke? I guess when it comes down to it a heart can't be broke. A heart continues to beat~ a heart goes on~ a heart can forgive~ a heart can heal. Lovedown, have to remember that word, so the next time ya feel like your heart is broken, remember you aren't heartbroken, your feeling love down. It just sounds so much better... and seems easier to accept than a broken heart..... On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Interesting concept, GS...nicely written...I like the style of your continuing thoughts... sp  it was love that first drew me, |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I have to agree......it doesn't sound quite as sad. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentleSpirit~ Neat idea ! I like the way you worked it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Gentle Spirit- What a wonderful concept..  I like that..  Nicely written.. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Sabriel.s.h.lover Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 73b.f.e. aka- Hickville |
i agree with everyone else, nice concept. i'm feeling that way right now. thanks 4 the read. stupidity should be painful |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
I liked it,it only makes since. If your let down in love then you would be love down. Do not fear going forward slowly, Fear only standing still. [This message has been edited by shadow974 (edited 07-24-2001).] |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Yes I fully agree , It does not break We all just feel each ache !! Hope P.S Also we all read and write about falling in love!!! Where do we fall to ? |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Gentle spirit I really like that! I will remember that for the next time someone says they have a broken heart! Will be a great one for my girls when they get older Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks to all of you for the kind comments, but the true inspiration for this came from my wise friend "DS" who was just helping me see things in a different perspective one day. (thanks DS, and hugs, your words help me even now) His words really hit home with me that day, and I will be eternally grateful for the friendship and the shared wisdom. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Love down sounds almost like a sunken ship christened "Love." I like the concept like all the others. Well done! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
Love down...enjoyed the thoughts. Sounds like your friend is a wise one. This was really cool the way that you worked it into poetry. *s* |
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