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Suetang
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0 posted 2001-07-23 09:02 PM


You saw the pain behind my weak smile
You saw the sadness within my eyes
You felt the aching in my heart
And you sensed the emptiness in my soul

Now because of you .........

The pain has disappeared
as my smile has now returned
The sadness has dispersed
and now my eyes - how they shine
The aching in my heart has healed
as it now plays a different tune
And my soul is full of love and compassion

All these things have happened because ........

you gave me confidence
you believed in me
you trusted me
you inspired me
and most of all
you loved me

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-07-23 09:04 PM



I truly don't believe one person could do one other person so much...

with such a wonderful outcome...

well done Sue!

snowpants
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2 posted 2001-07-23 10:31 PM


'All these things have happened because ........

you gave me confidence
you believed in me
you trusted me
you inspired me
and most of all
you loved me'

Beautiful lines, Sue...I truly enjoyed the emotion in this...nicely done...

sp  

it was love that first drew me,
it is love that will keep me here...
now I see love burning brightly
when everything else is unclear...

Suetang
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3 posted 2001-07-23 10:45 PM


Sunshine
I am very fortunate to have some very special people in my life.

snowpants
I'm so glad you liked this one and thank you for taking the time to read it.

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

Logan
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4 posted 2001-07-23 10:55 PM


lovely read, Sue..very gentle smile..if it could only happen for everybody
vlraynes
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5 posted 2001-07-24 02:24 AM



Suetang-
   What lovely thoughts you've penned here..
   It certainly is a blessing to have people
   who truly love and care about us isn't it?  
   Nicely done..

   hugs,
   ~vicky



"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



JamesMichael
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6 posted 2001-07-24 06:33 AM


Nice writing Sue...James
MARK V SHELDON
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7 posted 2001-07-24 12:46 PM


If even for a brief moment, to be able to bestow such things unto another and have them freely given by another...  not too many other things to truly define the word "successful"...

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

Suetang
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8 posted 2001-07-28 11:28 PM


Thanks so much everyone for all of your kind words.  Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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9 posted 2001-07-29 01:05 AM


So very sweet and uplifting...a beautiful write!  
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10 posted 2001-07-30 12:13 PM


Ain't love gr8?  Well done.

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11 posted 2001-07-31 04:01 AM


Sue,

how heartwarming this is...makes me want to pen some tributes of my own...grins

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