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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan 
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Regrets Sometimes when I delve on mistakes in my past I take aim like a marksman Repeats shall not pass Shadow boxing enemies in my mind I lash out at my teachers with false pride They're here to help They're on your side This I told myself after my insides heaved and cried Meager offerings I have to share Ten years work Some here some there My work has guided me while my dignity slept Others wisely said Watch where you step Wise are the masters of my trade I am but a grasshopper seeking shade |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, you still have much to learn, Grasshopper... and you shall... |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
A very humble poem....you should not regret your mistakes when you have learned from them though! ~Krista  "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
I don't wish to count mine..very gentle smile, but use them to continually keep learning..you will sing in the sun... |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Thank you, thank you, thank you. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Dan, this I thoroughly enjoyed. The message, the form, and the feel made this one stand out, for me. To live a life of no regrets is a trying challenge, no doubt about it, but how much richer a life! -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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