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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2001-07-23 08:30 PM



Silence
~*~
Silence haunts like a forsaken timepiece
sleep eludes as the moon observes
reflections of passion that dwell in dreams
from under the bed memories search
one seeking comfort
fool that I am, I let them in
too much to throw away
thats why dreams haunt
again and again

~*~
BloomingRose


© Copyright 2001 DebraS. - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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1 posted 2001-07-23 08:53 PM


Excellent! I love this, and the graphic, perfect!

Maree  

"little miss understood
little misunderstood"

~Marry me Jane~


vlraynes
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2 posted 2001-07-23 08:56 PM



Deb-
   Ah, yes...I like this very much..
   Wonderfully expressed, my friend..

   hugs,
   ~vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Decaflame
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3 posted 2001-07-24 11:40 AM



This likes me very much, Deb....well done!

Honeybee
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4 posted 2001-07-24 05:51 PM



Wow - this is so well expressed, if only you knew how much I relate to your words.  Into my library this goes~

Take care,
Melissa~

BloomingRose
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5 posted 2001-07-24 06:13 PM


Maree~ Thank you so much.

Vicky~ So glad you enjoyed.  

Decaflame~ I am glad this liked you, as you say.  

Melissa~ Many a dream haunts for those that have loved and lost.
Thank you for your nice comment.

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6 posted 2001-07-25 12:36 PM


BloomingRose~
The presentation of your thoughts is exquisite.
Very nicely done.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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7 posted 2001-07-26 01:08 PM


haunting dreams be gone
new love is awaiting me
to make new mem'ries

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth
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Cpat Hair
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8 posted 2001-07-26 01:10 PM


very nice and I agree the images fit the poem well... nicely done!
BloomingRose
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9 posted 2001-07-26 05:55 PM


Marge~ Thanks so much. Inspiration is blooming thanks to you!

Interloper~ Thanks, and I like your poem as well.  

Cpat~ Thanks.  

Dulcinea
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10 posted 2001-07-26 08:30 PM


Oh, this was very nicely done...very nicely done!  
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