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walker
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0 posted 2001-07-23 07:24 PM



My heart is easily to convince
it has a mind of a child
My heart's risky and adventurous
It knows no boundaries
My heart it gambles and looses
then it gambles again
My heart when will it learn
to listen, but to listen well.

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Denise
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1 posted 2001-07-23 09:15 PM


I'm sure most of us can relate to this, Walker. The more we're hurt, the more we learn, that's for sure.
snowpants
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2 posted 2001-07-23 10:33 PM


Hey walker...very nice write...I think our hearts are the last to learn anything logical...thanks for sharing!

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it was love that first drew me,
it is love that will keep me here...
now I see love burning brightly
when everything else is unclear...

Suetang
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3 posted 2001-07-23 10:54 PM


I guess our hearts are broken and let down at one time or another but they have the ability to mend quickly.  I loved reading this, thank you.
Take care....Sue

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PoeticKnight
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4 posted 2001-07-24 08:27 AM


That is a good question. As long as it doesn't go deaf.

Great poem.

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5 posted 2001-07-25 12:33 PM


my listening heart
preparing for your speaking
anticipation

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth
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thecraig
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6 posted 2001-07-25 04:07 PM


A heart is a heart & a heart. Pumping poem . Enjoyed.

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