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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-07-23 05:05 PM

Inspired by Bob and Ron

Bouys roll about
                  clanging
Ships slice through the swells
       Sailors lined up
      in formation
While dolphins dance
                     for them
   And boats push
        the water before them
             Trudging back
    to their wharfs
While Gulls hover
                         on the invisible

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.
Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth
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[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 07-23-2001).]

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-07-23 05:52 PM

Yes... I can see them..and you painted them well...

nice work Interloper...

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

2 posted 2001-07-23 06:00 PM

Enjoyed the image. Well limned.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-07-23 06:36 PM

InterLoper~
I enjoyed where your sightseaing took me~
Vivid imagery - nice run of inspiration.
~*Marge*~

LOOK ... I'm #3 !

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-07-23 06:50 PM

they do have that way about them do they not???

I really liked the line breaks here. . . they gave that idea of being on the waves. . . and seeing the different things here and there. . .

great job. . .

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Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2001-07-23 08:31 PM

...while dolphins dance...

you learn well...from two excellent task-masters...

next lesson, please?

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

6 posted 2001-07-24 05:34 AM

Enjoyed the show. Reminds me of my past.

Melton

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

7 posted 2001-07-24 08:47 AM

Well worded I esecail like the line about the gulls hovering on the invisible, of coarse it's a rise of air, but maybe not.

Do not fear going forward slowly,
Fear only standing still.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

8 posted 2001-07-24 09:05 AM

I actually read this last night and was listening to a ocean sounds cd.....it fit so perfectly......I like this very much

wonderfully done

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