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HopeS
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0 posted 2001-07-23 01:11 PM



Upon Moonlight Reflection

There on a beach blanket
Snuggling side by side
Waves lapping sand
Each flow of the tide

Strumming on your guitar
Songs you play for me
Waves washing ashore
In rhythms of the sea

Dreams flew the distance
Desires reach ashore
Waves of love caress
Passionate to the core

Ocean breezes sweeping
Stars shine from above
Waves increase tempo
Sensuous beats of love

Upon moonlight reflection
Soft lips slightly apart
Waves dance in tune
Swaying heart to heart

Hope

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1 posted 2001-07-23 01:22 PM


sounds like a nice way to dance..

nice work..I enjoyed

FaeryKynn
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2 posted 2001-07-23 01:26 PM


reminds me of so many summer romances that i still swoon  over  bravo, very nice work  i enjoyed it  
Mike
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3 posted 2001-07-24 12:29 PM


nicely written, enjoyed.
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4 posted 2001-07-24 12:42 PM


HopeS~
Nothing as romantic as that Luna glow~
Very nicely done.
~*Marge*~

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5 posted 2001-07-24 01:06 AM


Your words brought up sweet memories....thank you for sharing these romantic piece.

Charisma

vlraynes
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6 posted 2001-07-24 01:59 AM



Hope-
   Ah yes...this is soooo lovely and romantic..
   Very beautifully done..

   hugs,
   ~vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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7 posted 2001-07-25 12:06 PM


I just love setting the mood for such nice poetry

Let thy moon arise.  William Blake

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