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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Do not curse those In valley below Whose heads, while not So close to clouds and sun See better the valley floor In daisy petal days And stream bottom ripple The nights passing. Cry not that the view From hilltop aerie of Cloud drifting day’s beginnings Seen long before those below Rise from safe slumber Illuminates your mind with So much more of future And past For all roots Are planted in earth |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
perspectives indeed well done! |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Ah yes, good...one of those marvelous pieces that tell me "look a little closer" and as you draw me in...I see the actual rainbow of the words through my crystal eyes... well done Sir! |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Once again, Ron -- the inescapable universal law: "As above, so below." I very much enjoyed the "lofty" feel of this write which at the same time remained grounded in Truth. -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ron, I'll go along with Marks clever answer. |
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