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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Someone... Virginia Salter someone stole the darkness filled its corner with a great orange ball that shone a whiteness reaching far into the heavens gleaming the midnight blue into a soft, soft gray placing a golden edge on all within its path gilding even flesh along with mineral vegetable and flowing liquid gas kissing the hour with a new and precious day © August 9, 2000 |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nice imagery VAS.. I enjoyed |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
nicely written, I can't get the hang of free verse and envy those who can write it. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ohhhh this is stunning, like the imagery you present here. Charisma |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
thanks, all, for your encouraging words, they mean a lot to me |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Great imagery. At first I thought of the Atom bomb ... shame on me  |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Pah - atom bomb.... what does he know, right VAS? Enjoyed VERY much! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
heh heh heh, well, I must admit that last night, since I wrote this last year, that I was trying to decide what the liquid gas was, I'm hoping it's the dew or something like that. Thanks Interloper and Decaflame! However, just so everyone knows, this is a description of an amazing sunrise last year. [This message has been edited by VAS (edited 07-25-2001).] |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
And an amazing sunrise it was through your words too! Enjoyed this. ~ Give the heavens above more than just a passing glance ~And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance ~ I hope you dance. (Lee Ann Womack) |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
Nice sunrise for me yesterday morning but dang, I didn't write about it. Thanks VAS. \\ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Vas, you reminded me of an occasion when i saw the big orange ball too....simply wonderful |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Wow! Virginia, what great imagination and imagery you present! Well done. Deb |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Excellent imagery and thought - you have a unique way in looking at nature and life Melissa~ |
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