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Lost To The Stars
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Lost To The Stars |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Lost to the Stars To stars that diamond up above I need the lust of Van Gogh’s love Colors of Renoir’s detailed thrust Without Picasso’s holocaust A touch of dotted Seurat’s din A scene that grabs and draws you in A palette dripping vibrant hue That shows a world of painted new. A canvas full of optic flow A painting full of primal glow That makes you care and come aware That holds you still and makes you stare. It is a wish and not a dream A palette full of painters scheme All painted with desires brush And stroked with magic of its lush. But alas it will not cast, for The hourglass draws near the last. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 07-23-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done...an enjoyable read Seymour |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Love it when you painted words of magic.....enjoyed it very much. Charisma |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
To stars that diamond up above I need the lust of Van Gogh’s love Colors of Renoir’s detailed thrust Without Picasso’s holocaust A touch of dotted Surat’s din A scene that grabs and draws you in A palette dripping vibrant hue That shows a world of painted new. A canvas full of optic flow A painting full of primal glow =================================== All painted with desires brush And stroked with magic of its lush. But alas it will not cast, for The hourglass draws near the last. ===================================== YOU ARE SO COOL!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE that first verse!!!! What a very very cool poem I cant think of a more perfect poetic melding than that of a poets mind and an artists eye... and you prove that with this DELIGHTFUL poem (and ya knew I was gonna love the challenge of finding you pics)  your gonna have to help me with the Surat intend tho... several searches turned up very little... is that an Artist? or reference to the city in India? teach me my wise and groovy sensi, for I am but your grasshopper *L* *winkiewinkie*  me ~Van Gogh~  ~Renoir~  ~Picasso~  ~Seurat ~ [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 07-23-2001).] |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Just standing here in awe and amaze....sometimes, that is all I can do... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cpat Hair, Thank you for the read and nice comment. Charisma, Delightful comment, thank you. JM, Sorry about that, Seurat is the correct spelling. He was a french artist that painted with dots. You did a wonderful job with a wonderful commontary. Love Ya Stinky |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady, You are very sweet, thank you. *L* |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
really enjoyed reading this Seymour, very well done exciting use of language and knowledge of art |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
HE REALLY DOES PAINT WITH "DOTS OF DIN" see...once again..I learn from you and once again I say..youre so COOL Im going to edit the other reply accordingly  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
VAS, Thank you for a wonderful response. JM, You are something else and I'm still trying to find out what the else is. LOL Once again thank you my sweet Tinker Bell. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
From what I've read of most of your work, Sy, I'd say you already possess that for which you ask... perhaps it takes the perspectives of others upon one's own work to change one's ever-too-critical mindframe into a stronger sense of "self-worth" in terms of one's artistic renderings... (By the way: is that an inadvertent typo in the title or an allusion to something in particular...?) -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." --Del Casher [This message has been edited by MARK V SHELDON (edited 07-23-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I am but a sponge... and you are wisdom's water that flows thru me... baptizing me the vision I would not otherwise been blessed with. *winkiewinkie* me  ~Butterfly on a Monet Sky~  ~Butterfly Lands On A Painters Palette~  ~Butterfly Loves To Paint~  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I didn't think anything could be more delightful than your poem, Seymour... for your artistic and poetic talents blend superbly into a read that invites the reader to see. *S* But whatever you're paying Janet Marie, she deserves a raise! LOL! For her graphics are the icing on this tasty creation you've given us... Beautiful! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mark, The title was a typo and as to your response, flattery will get you everywhere. Thanks JM, Thank you sweet, now I know what the else is. Love and kisses and hugs from me and doubble from Randy. Suthern, You are part of the icing and JM's salary is mucho love *L* Sy |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'It is a wish and not a dream A palette full of painters scheme All painted with desires brush And stroked with magic of its lush.' Fantastic write! I definitely enjoyed this one... sp  it was love that first drew me, |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Great job with this one Sy. . . I really liked the way that you used the methods of painting that each artist used in their works to paint the stars of life. . . excellent. . . ---------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Snowpants, So glad you enjoyed, thank you. Sven, Thank you my friend for the beautiful comment. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sy, I believe the paintings in your living room could hang equally with the ones you have mentioned.....very nice work, sensi |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Balladeer, Nice of you to say so. Thanks for the read. See you soon. Sy |
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