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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-07-23 02:21 AM


Club Chicks

I know what club chicks want.
They want what club duds got.
I know what club dudes want.
They want what club chicks got.
Why do men find club chicks so hard to resist?
Therein lies the reason why club chicks exist.
I mean I'm not a connoisseur
of fine women or anything like that
but when I see something about a woman I like
I've been known to pass a compliment
or ask for a dance.
Do club chicks like guys because
they are handsome and debonair
or do they like them because they
have plenty of money to share?
How about dancing?
That has to be one of the seven wonders of life.
Club chicks love to kiss and dance
and share romantic nights.
Cindi said it right when she said
girls just want to have fun
while the club guys hope
they are the lucky one.
Yet while the music's playing
and the money is flowing
you really have no way of knowing
if they are sincere.
To keep the party going they will
say almost anything you want to hear
but when the money's gone watch
how fast club chicks disappear.

Jameslee@July22,2001

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2dalimit
Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228
Mississippi coast
1 posted 2001-07-23 05:26 AM


Your knowledge surpasses you.
...when the money's gone watch
how fast club chicks disappear

Is that really true?
Good one.

Melton

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...
2 posted 2001-07-23 11:51 AM


...that's why clubs suck.  "You will never find a more wretched hive of scum and villainy..."  :-}

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

mpt
Junior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 32
australia
3 posted 2001-07-23 12:44 PM


i have t agree with mark on that one, clubs suck. club chicks may look good but most of them are either theyre just to have their own fun and not looking for a guy or theyre looking for the size of your wallet not you. entertaining read, well done.

Though dreams can be deceiving
Like faces are to hearts
They serve for sweet relieving
When fantasy and reality lie too far apart
- Fiona Apple

Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton
4 posted 2001-07-23 05:03 PM


I really like this it's kinda deep and very catchy....I feel like this could be rap song song with a few changes....I really like this James....very nice writing!!

Nathan

[This message has been edited by Nate Dogg (edited 07-23-2001).]

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