my best friend... (first post, pls reply)

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mpt
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since 2001-07-22

Posts 32
australia

0 posted 2001-07-22 12:39 PM

I found an Angel one day
Her name, Insignificant
Her beauty, Ovepowering
Her love, Amazing
Whenever I need her, I know she's there
Whenever she needs me, she knows I'll care
What is it she does, that is so amazing?
She's just herself, That's why she is so special
When she is hurt, I feel it too
I wish I could protect her
From the pain in this world
Nobody can, But it won't stop me from trying
Because she is my angel, Sent from above
Because she is my angel, A best friend for me to love

still some quiver when i deliver - Chuck D, Public Enemy

[This message has been edited by mpt (edited 07-22-2001).]

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2001-07-22 02:44 PM

Mpt,
It's always nice to have a best friend.

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2001-07-22 02:44 PM

best friends are to be treasured. You write of this well. Welcome to passions, you will enjoy it here. *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

**lost**
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since 2001-07-16

Posts 32
ma

3 posted 2001-07-22 04:00 PM

this remindes me of my best friend. great. its so personal and right from the heart. i like it a lot

confused among strangers,
lost amongst myself.
**lost**

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

4 posted 2001-07-22 04:27 PM

You keep loving your angel mpt and keep writing too. Welcome to this wonderful world of poetry.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

5 posted 2001-07-22 04:29 PM

Well done, Mpt, and welcome to passions! Looking forward to reading more of your work.

*smiles*
~Tier

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

6 posted 2001-07-22 06:04 PM

Welcome to Passions! You'll find as you post more, it isn't necessary to say "come read me..." we do that all the time!

Please, check your e-mail for a special message!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

7 posted 2001-07-22 06:18 PM

What a wonderful first piece of writing you have given us, I'll look forward to reading more of your work. Welcome to Passions from one Aussie to another! Take care.......Sue

Suetang

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2001-07-22 06:32 PM

"She's just herself. That's why she's so amazing."
Enjoyed your poem...James

Voiceless
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since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

9 posted 2001-07-22 09:10 PM

Hey,
great poem~
Can't wait to read more..

~*Freedom Is Not Free*~ (Korean War Memorial)

Dulcinea
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since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

10 posted 2001-07-22 11:29 PM

Nothing better than having a best friend to love...very nice! *S*

SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

11 posted 2001-07-23 12:02 PM

Best friends truly are something to write about. You have honoured yours well!
Welcome to Passions!

you'll love it here.
~Krista

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie

Saunni
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

12 posted 2001-07-23 12:46 PM

mpt, a very beautiful first poem. I love friendship poetry! I think there needs to be more of peoems of friendship! Enjoyed!

Sauni

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

13 posted 2001-07-23 02:01 AM

Nice job here, like the wonderful depiction of a caring friend here. Welcome to Passions as well

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.

cpalmer
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since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

14 posted 2001-07-23 02:21 AM

I liked this very much...nice tribute to your friend! Welcome to passions
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

Lisann
Member

since 2001-01-31

Posts 350

15 posted 2001-07-23 10:52 AM

I really liked this poem. I have one of these angels too---her name is Jane. Thank you for sharing and for putting a smile on my face with what had started out a difficult day.

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

16 posted 2001-07-23 11:01 AM

friends such as this are a treasure indeed..
nicely done..and welcome to Passions

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