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Flutterwings
Member

since 2001-07-10

Posts 288
Maine

0 posted 2001-07-22 11:27 AM

Jim Warren ~Artist~

As I watch the silent waves,
I see your face in the ripples
glistening in trails of moonbeams
as my heart drowns in your distance.

All there is, is darkness and nostalgia.
Lonely clouds drift across the sky
and I vision you walking on water
headed for my empty arms.

It took forever it seems, to feel your
hungry lips on mine and hear
the beating of your heart
keeping rhythm to mine.

My hands cupped your face
and your eyes said, I love you
and a tear fell on to your lips
and I kissed it away.

The silence is like a melody
that plays in my mind
but with you in my arms
I will forever sing your song;

as you take me away to where
you live in distant memories
as we dance to the silence
of the nearness of you.

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

1 posted 2001-07-22 11:42 AM

You made me dance with my special memory in this! Thanks for recalling such sweet moments. The picture is visual love! Very lovely write.
Sincerely,
Rwood

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

2 posted 2001-07-22 12:41 PM

Beautiful images, flutterwings...I'm truly loving this...your poem is a perfect mirror image of the pic...fantastic write!

sp

it was love that first drew me,
it is love that will keep me here...
now I see love burning brightly
when everything else is unclear...

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

3 posted 2001-07-22 02:28 PM

Love the poem and the picture, well done.

Do not fear going forward slowly,
Fear only standing still.

**lost**
Junior Member

since 2001-07-16

Posts 32
ma

4 posted 2001-07-22 02:36 PM

very good...i like it. i live in memories but this poem has given me hope for the future. my love has been seperated from my by so many miles so this poem has given me so much faith that things will all work out.

confused among strangers,
lost amongst myself.
**lost**

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2001-07-22 05:30 PM

A lovely reminisce

Melissa~

Martha Cowan
Member

since 2001-03-08

Posts 240
Groves, Texas

6 posted 2001-07-22 05:50 PM

~*~sighs...~*~
Embracing and enchanting words of beauty and eloquence that blankets the heart and soul with the spirit of an awakening of long awaited dreams. So very lovely, Mag!
Hugs and smiles, and much love to you!
Martha (~*~d~*~)

DYME
Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 104
Texas

7 posted 2001-07-22 07:03 PM

beautiful. thanks for the read.

I'm not crazy...I have papers to prove it!!

No weapon formed against me shall prosper... ISAIAH 54:17

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

8 posted 2001-07-22 08:47 PM

I thoroughly enjoyed the image and the images of those memories...beautifully done. *S*

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

9 posted 2001-07-23 04:50 PM

Flutterwings-
   Lovely thoughts from your pen..
   Very nicely done..

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

10 posted 2001-07-23 05:51 PM

Well, well Mz. Flutterwings, are we not the romantic in this one! I loved it, and your presentation was beautiful. I won't write you a book like Martha (lol), but I will say you weave words into a mean poem! I luv ya 2.

~ Give the heavens above more than just a passing glance ~And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance ~ I hope you dance. (Lee Ann Womack)

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

11 posted 2001-08-01 10:05 PM

*Bump*

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