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It Won't Hurt
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It Won't Hurt |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
It won't hurt us anymore, Because everthing Is going to be alright, The days became night, and when you look at yourself, you will find love In your heart, Because trust my heart what Iam saying to you, Yes,It's true, What my heart say, Trust me, Come with me, I will take you every where you want to go, Because the years we have been hurt After so many years gone by, You and me closer than ever before, you can see that the pain Is over, and the dark clouds rolls by, It Is gonna to rain anytime, There will be answers, But no sorrow , So, Trust me, What I say, Yes, It Is true What I say to you? The sorrow Is over, Tomorrow will be alright, It won't hurt us anymore, I swear It... [This message has been edited by vandana (edited 07-22-2001).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
oh, if we could make such a promise and have the power to make it come true... but, perhaps, as long as you're together, it will be a palatable pain |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
What a wonderful sense of hope this leaves inside as read. I wish you the best  Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
nicely written Vandana, enjoyed your poem. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VanDana~ There is such promise in your thoughts. Nicely said, hon. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
A good promise that should be well kept. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed this vandana...we all need a time for healing...James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful my friend. . . you touch the heart so well. . .  ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
A resolve of hopefullness here...well done! |
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