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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
The air is sticky and hot How I came here I forgot All I remember is waking up Next to an empty cup No one can really explain This nonstop emotional train It barreled right on by I never even said good-bye I finally accept my fate Letting go of anger and hate I look now instead To the road up ahead The pathway is clear In spite of my fear There's a sparkle in my eye Replacing tears I've cried No more pain and sorrow Only dreams of tomorrow Fill my empty heart A new course I'll chart Come take my hand Together love expands Giving us a chance At life's miraculous dance All writing comes |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Well done Logan, full of hope and renewal of purpose, let's dance!!!!! |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
Great rhythm and emotional rhyme. It flowed with so much hope and sincerity! I applaud  a great write! ((~.~)) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
tomorrow is the only thing keeping me going at times and I know people say we should live in the present and I try, oh I try these were positive flowing words, Jennifer." I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Nicely written and of coarse tomorrows a new day. Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahhh LW, enjoyed this, as proud of you as seeing the daughter looking over her shoulder as her bike wobbles down the walk, hollaring back with a big smile..I AM DOING IT...very gentle smile |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
vandana: Thanks! VAS: The dance is always on, my friend, all we have to do is join in. Futterwings: It's very sincere and I know it's going to happen. Thank you! Kathleen: All we can do is try, sweetheart. Tomorrow keeps me going also, you never know what joys it will bring. Thank you much! Shadow: Always a new day awaiting us no matter what today holds. Logan: Aww, what a sweet thing to say!! It has made me smile to know you are proud of me, my friend. You so remind me of my father at times. Smiles to you! All writing comes |
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