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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-07-22 09:16 AM



        Droplets of Dreams


I pour my dreams
in a tall clear glass
watch them bubble
impatience to surpass
stir with my finger
I mix them well
elixir of hope
a magic spell
lean over to take
a quick sip
how sweet and quenching
to my parched lips
amazing to me
a drink both hot and cold
liquid so thin
yet a taste so bold
equal mixture of
sun rays and moon beams
such are the droplets
of my dreams

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet)  Shakespeare

© Copyright 2001 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2001-07-22 09:37 AM


Slick,
I wouldn't mind a cup of that. Enjoyed

g-hm
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2 posted 2001-07-22 09:54 AM


What a powerful drink, need that recipe.
Could stand a sip today myself.

VAS
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3 posted 2001-07-22 10:09 AM


what lovely, delightful thoughts!  

droplets of dreams mixed with elixir of hope

very enjoyable read!!

**lost**
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ma
4 posted 2001-07-22 01:56 PM


very good choice of words. it shows the difference in experiences,, the ups and downs to be trite. it relays a powerful feeling. it shows hope for the future. it is very optimistic even. i dont really know how to respond except that i very much like this. it is great

confused among strangers,
lost amongst myself.
**lost**

shadow974
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since 2001-06-21
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5 posted 2001-07-22 02:14 PM


Wonderfully done.

Do not fear going forward slowly,
Fear only standing still.

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2001-07-22 02:30 PM


Could I please join you in a cup of this?  Sounds wonderful to me.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Honeybee
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7 posted 2001-07-22 05:24 PM



An awesome write, Helen, it's a keeper~

Melissa  

Irish Rose
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8 posted 2001-07-22 08:01 PM


make a pot I'll be right over  

" I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis"

Kathleen


Lone Wolf
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9 posted 2001-07-22 10:56 PM


May all your dreams come true, Helen.  This was lovely!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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10 posted 2001-07-26 09:09 AM


sounds like quite a drink...

I enjoyed!

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11 posted 2001-07-27 12:02 PM


Bottle it and you will make millions

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth
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