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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-07-21 10:06 PM

The Walk

golden heads ‘neath fingertips
on length of green graced stem
to dignify with reverence
I touch, but do not bend

‘neath sky blue flecked of white
as wisps of cloud stream by
so light shall pass before the day
then beckons night come sigh

as the salmon eve delves deep
into night’s twilight purple keep
and mourning dove quits its song
I find this love for you belongs

in the morrow’s sun that brings
love’s retain in all good things

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-07-21 10:07 PM

Bill, this is very nice, soft...

" I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis"

Kathleen

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-07-21 10:13 PM

Thank you Irish...

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rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

3 posted 2001-07-21 10:58 PM

And sunsets do go hand in hand in the walk of life. Romantically of course, and beautifully scribed. Love is always on the horizon.

Sincerely,
Rwood

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

4 posted 2001-07-22 12:04 PM

Ahh, the imagery is so very well done here, makes me want to walk the fields in such splendor..very very nice, Sis...very gentle smile

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-07-27 01:27 PM

Karilea~

This is just soooooooooo pretty~

'as the salmon eve delves deep
into night’s twilight purple keep'

Exactly ! !
Not much that is prettier than the palette of the twilight~
Beautiful imagery.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

6 posted 2001-07-28 10:35 PM

Sunshine-
   This is really beautiful..

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

7 posted 2001-07-28 10:45 PM

Love should always be renewed that way, lovely words here.

ShannonM
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since 2001-07-28

Posts 104
Drifitng

8 posted 2001-07-28 10:50 PM

This struck me as very soothing and pleasant.

ShannonM

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