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Mike
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0 posted 2001-07-21 09:25 PM



If I should die,
I do bequest,
if kindly would,
at my behest,
please bury me,
out at the mall,
so winter, summer,
spring and fall,
all the people,
that I hold dear,
will at my side,
be ever near.

© Copyright 2001 Mike - All Rights Reserved
mirror man
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1 posted 2001-07-21 09:52 PM


Please forgive me, but I can't decide whether you are being serious or not.  An interesting concept, though.  
Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-07-21 10:07 PM



Are they all out spending your hard-earned money?

Let's you and me go walking in the fields...even if it is hot...we know where we belong!

rwood
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3 posted 2001-07-21 10:54 PM


But you'de be spinging up daisies in the shoe department! That's no place for a writer! Let them eat cake! Love this and hope it is not serious  
Sincerely,
Rwood

Denise
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4 posted 2001-07-22 10:46 PM


ROTFL    Good one, Mike! Very cute!
Lone Wolf
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5 posted 2001-07-22 10:48 PM


Very tongue in cheek, Mike.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

ThUnDeRkYsS
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6 posted 2001-07-23 01:11 AM


I like this    Very good.

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



Nan
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7 posted 2001-07-23 02:16 PM


Is the mall air conditioned?...

Martie
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8 posted 2001-07-23 05:48 PM


Mike-  When you are clever, you are very, very clever!!
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Deep in the heart
9 posted 2001-07-23 05:51 PM


{grin} Forever malling ... what a concept
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10 posted 2001-07-27 01:53 PM


Mike~

Your wish for the mall
as your resting place
sits well with me
with a grin on my face~
As best I can recall
the greatest bargain
I ever sought
was your humor for FREE~
Can't be bought ! !

Just a'pickin and grinning~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                 noles1@totcon.com              

Marilyn
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11 posted 2001-07-27 02:00 PM


LOL

There is definately a statement in this piece. LOL

Marilyn

Victoria
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12 posted 2001-07-27 09:27 PM


This is funny..yes because they might not have time to visit you other wise ha..good idea..

              

                 ~Victoria~

BloomingRose
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13 posted 2001-07-27 09:46 PM



I do hope this is in jest, because I have a silly grin on my face.  

Deb

Irish Rose
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14 posted 2001-07-27 11:09 PM


now I liked this, oh yes, very tongue in cheek and very much a surprise

" I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis"

Kathleen


VAS
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15 posted 2001-07-28 12:52 PM


yep, go where the action is

soooooo that's the way to go, eh

one set of my friends would come if I was by an all-you-can-eat place...unless it'd ruin their appetites


vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
16 posted 2001-07-31 09:32 PM



Mike-
   LOL...you amuse me, sir.
   Thanks for the giggle.

   hugs,
   ~vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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