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Open Poetry #15

Black Curling Locks

Waseem Cheema
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since 2001-03-16

Posts 369
Pakistan

0 posted 2001-07-21 01:47 PM

KALI ZULFAIN
BLACK CURLING LOCKS

Uss ki rashmi kali zulfain ney kiya kuch aysa jado muj par
Her black curling locks conjure me in such a way
Mari ankhoon main kushboo basa kar apni, maray dil ki basti ko weran kar giya
By spreading her smell in my eyes, went away by desolating my heart's Valley

~Wasi~

I love to nice poetry.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

1 posted 2001-07-21 02:43 PM

extremely romantic feel to this

she surely must be pleased

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2001-07-21 04:19 PM

I love women with black hair...James

helen smith
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since 2001-03-12

Posts 240

3 posted 2001-07-24 07:08 PM

red hair is nice too waseem .......ahhhhhhhhhh A sweet little poem.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

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with you

4 posted 2001-07-24 07:46 PM

Wasi this is beautiful.....Auburn hair is nice toooooo LOL

Martie

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California

5 posted 2001-07-24 08:10 PM

With a few words you have magically captured the allure of dark hair and love.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2001-07-24 08:57 PM

Waseem,
Beauty is beauty in any language. Enjoyed

Waseem Cheema
Member

since 2001-03-16

Posts 369
Pakistan

7 posted 2001-07-27 05:03 AM

Thanx for such nice and lovely comments... Thanx

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