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dgvarner
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High Springs, Florida

0 posted 2001-07-21 01:25 PM


(heres a little ditty i left for tricks one day in 1990..we dug it out of the 'attic' during a recent conversation..     WE're posting it for our resident angel, jesse   )


you cannot be happy
with a frown on your heart

turn it upside down

your heart will be jostled

but soon enough
it too
will understand

-dgvarner
2-23-90


"sometimes when youre hurrying too much to see whats for tomorrow, you miss whats for today.."  -demi moore

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 07-21-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 dgvarner - All Rights Reserved
rwood
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1 posted 2001-07-21 01:46 PM


Perfect! The perfect lines reminiscent of "Don't worry be happy". Soon enough is so true. Great advise to live by.
Sincerely,
Rwood

Jesse Jaymz
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2 posted 2001-07-21 02:05 PM


hey hun
*hugs*  thank you sooooo  much for diggin this one up.  i love it     its short cute and sweet    like you.  hehe  thanks you hun
love ya
jesse

When I was a young man I vowed never to marry until I found the ideal woman. Well, I found her - but, alas, she was waiting for the perfect man. :(

VAS
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3 posted 2001-07-21 02:18 PM


thanks for posting this, cute and a great reminder when I'm being mad at myself, like right now, maybe if I go stand on my head my frown will be upside down


dgvarner
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4 posted 2001-07-22 07:28 PM



RWOOD..thanks..lol..this one, from the days when i had a few more answers than i do now!  

ANGEL..youre welcome jes..  take care of you!

VAS..rofl...hey, if it works..ya know..!  

thanks all for reading!
hugs, g

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
5 posted 2001-07-23 12:52 PM



dg-
   Well, lookie here...we finally posted
   a poem together! LOL  
   Have I mentioned I LOVE THIS?!  
   Thanks for penning this little
   thought for me so long ago..

   Love and hugs,
   ~vicky

Jess...this little ditty has
helped me many times since dg first
penned it for me, and I hope it will
do the same for you..

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
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6 posted 2001-07-23 12:55 PM


I like this alot! Cool write!  

Sauni

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 1999-09-23
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Wisconsin
7 posted 2001-07-23 01:59 AM


So much truth in this one    You make it all sound so reassuringly easy    Like that.

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



cpalmer
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since 2001-06-26
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Phoenix, Az
8 posted 2001-07-23 02:23 AM


DG! That is wonderful...I know Jesse will like it! You do such beautiful work!
Hugs
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

dgvarner
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High Springs, Florida
9 posted 2001-07-25 12:52 PM


TRICKS.. now that youve gotten over being mad at me from those days, huh..?  LOL  we had some times didnt we!  *sigh* those were the days..
yes, we've finally posted together..lol  but still...we must work on posting one we've written together!     

SAUNIE..thanks..glad you enjoyed  

THUNDER..nah..not easy..lol  just poetic..  

CINDI..you flatter me.. thanks for reading!  good to have a new friend  

hugs, g

kaile
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10 posted 2001-08-28 02:10 PM


not easy to adhere by, this ditty but gosh, what a thought!

p/s: this is going to be in my library

Charisma
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11 posted 2001-08-28 03:47 PM


I think......that I love all these lines  
as they are sooooo true.

Charisma

vlraynes
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12 posted 2001-08-28 04:06 PM



dg-
   Just popping back in for another smile!
   Yes...we DO need to write something together!!
   I can't wait to do that!

   Love ya,
   ~Me


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



shadow974
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 636
Michigan
13 posted 2001-08-28 04:21 PM


Wonderful, I loved this one.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.
ARAB PROVERB

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
14 posted 2001-08-28 04:37 PM


What a great poetic way to look at it!  Good show!
dgvarner
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High Springs, Florida
15 posted 2001-08-28 06:39 PM


cool..thanks KAILE, for pulling me back up..   and hey, how nice to be in your library  

CHARISMA..thanks    i'm glad you liked!

TRICKS..yes!  we DO need to write something together..!!  and not one of those impromptu dirty ditties either...ROFL!

SHADOW..so glad you enjoyed  

ETHOME..thanks a bunch friend!  

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"i believe we are here for a reason.  
as each day unfolds,
we see less of the shadow
and more of the sun"  -unknown

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