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MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...

0 posted 2001-07-21 11:53 AM


Soft-faced phantoms
Feel-good dreamers
Candyland lovers

Forever

reaches out
From
Star-crossed innocence
Of

sacred

Child


inside


(Copyright 2001 by: MARK V SHELDON)

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

© Copyright 2001 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
shadow974
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1 posted 2001-07-21 12:06 PM


Very Good Mark, It touches me as this: I am one of those feel good dreamers and I will be forever. I reach out from the innocent child. To find a life on the outside, growth and growing.

Do not fear going forward slowly,
Fear only standing still.

walker
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2 posted 2001-07-21 12:12 PM


The child inside is sacred, is that little engine that keeps us running. Thanks.
Mishtheelf
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3 posted 2001-07-21 12:20 PM


This one I got a pretty easy interpretation of, it seemed straightforward.  *L* Maybe it just struck me in the right place.  It does raise a bit of a ponderance for me though.  Is anyone ever really starcrossed?  Does Fate decide the path of our lives?  Or do we?
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2001-07-21 12:34 PM


Mark,
Enjoyed the read.

MARK V SHELDON
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5 posted 2001-07-21 02:09 PM


I hear you, Dan.  That's more or less where my thoughts were...

Absolutely, Walker.  May he/she always remain the sacred child.

Ted, things are as simple as we choose them to be... and conversely.  The questions raised are the ones meant to be pondered.

Thanks, Sy.

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

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