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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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*for my friends, Saunni and serenity* quiet now tender heart let memories hold you close never gone is the soul ever present is the spirit watching over smiles of love wiping clean tears of loss spirit speaks weep not my child heart answers I cannot help but spirit gives gift from life heart sees sunrise in amber new --------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
From darkness, light shines. How well penned! Every word paints a picture of mournful anquish. The ending sheds a light of hope. I applaud  a writing from the  Bravo! ((~.~)) |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautiful Heart *sigh*You make me cry with your tenderness in this.  You really do. I am sure they will love it, and find much peace in your gift of sweetness and words. All of your friends are lucky to have you, yanno?  |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
Sven.... As always you do have the words just right.  They will love this. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful, heartfelt, loving. A wonderful gift for friends in need. Sandra |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Oh, Sven, what can I say? You have a heart beyond beautiful, my friend. You write of such elegance and every word stands out. (Because of your heart.) I have never known a man, much like yourself, to truly care of anothers life and situation, that can set aside everything to come and comfort those who need it. If I were able to have a magic wand, you can bet that I asked for every man to be like you. For you have a heart that holds much more than gold and certainly are among the "precious" ones! We are fortunate here at Passions, to have this chance to be here and with you. I can write a million poem, my friend, but to write of you, there are just NO WORDS to describe HEAVEN SENT. I stick by the words my dad told me. Stay true to heart and you can never go wrong. You proved him to be absolutely right. Thank you for thinking of me, and if ever you should need something, I am always here. Thanks again! Sauni Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps [This message has been edited by Saunni (edited 07-22-2001).] |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Lovey words, Sven... *smiles* ~Tier |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
what a nice way to writ a poem for your friends enjoy your read |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is nice Sven..James |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sven, what a beautiful tribute to them Melissa~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all so much for your wonderful words. . . as someone who has lost a Father, I know the emotions that go along with this. . . and I'm glad that I could share them with you. . . Saunni my friend. . . thank you for your beautiful words . . . --------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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