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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2001-07-21 10:32 AM



Ah, this Piece of Day
Virginia Salter

this lovely, lovely piece of day
when moist of air holds heat at bay
of summer sun, its powered throng
and rays that sing a lazy song

when butterflies flit awake
seeking for a sugar cake
within the succulent of blossom
whose sweetness is completely awesome

and honeybees buzz their alarms
to waken all to morning’s charms
when shadows west from eastern rise
and early birds seek out their prize

and slumberers snooze much too long
to hear and see this morning song
oh Saturday of summer’s weeks
shimmers down and over peaks

laces fern and garden’s grow
more delicate than one might sew
for it’s creation’s sweet betide
that escorts in this summer side


© July 21, 2001

© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
walker
Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida
1 posted 2001-07-21 12:14 PM


We're having a lovel;y dya here too, Thanks for the beauty in this one.
shadow974
Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636
Michigan
2 posted 2001-07-21 12:19 PM


Good morning to you VAS, I'm just a little late. Nice poem!!!

Do not fear going forward slowly,
Fear only standing still.

VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
3 posted 2001-07-21 12:24 PM


thanks walker and shadow...and shadow, it's still morning in my  town, got 2 1/2 hours left of it heh heh heh


Mishtheelf
Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 68

4 posted 2001-07-21 12:34 PM


*sigh*  I USED to get up early *LOL*  Desire to ever see my friends forced my hand a bit, so now I stay awake far too late and sleep 'till the morning's almost gone!  But I remember well the morning's boon, and you painted a pretty picture of one such morning.  Thank you for the imagery!

Ted

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2001-07-21 12:38 PM


VAS,
A nice piece of a nice morn, enjoyed.

VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
6 posted 2001-07-21 12:40 PM


thank you Mish and Sy, very much, and now, having arisen so very early, I need to make my morning walk before I take a nap and awaken 'hot'

yawwwwwwnnnnnnnn.

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