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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
If you wish, you might receive, all a matter of how you believe. But if you wish, you better be sure, for the fates may use it as a lure. To see if your strength is up to par, examined like a specimen in a jar. The fates don’t judge, nor condemn, only rub their hands now and then. Set up tasks to test your will, but the choices are yours even still. Freedom to do as you please, with wishes you wanted and did receive. If heartbreak comes with what you got, you have to continue with your lot. There is no sense to cry and moan, the wish was yours, not a loan. So straighten your shoulders and go your way, the past was back, it was yesterday. |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
There's an old saying about being careful what you wish for. Sometimes, this proves very true. Neat poem. Betty Lou Hebert |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, but I think the fates should stop trying to lure me into the wrong choices  This is a wonderful write, Logan, truly. And I kind of believe it, though I have my problems with Ms Fate. Sandra |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Logan, what a write here! Very good, My friend! Very talented! Sauni Sauni :) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Ive always been told...be careful what you wish for...you might get it...nice write Logan |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Ahh...you are very wise Mr. Logan I shall try to keep this little nugget of wisdom in mind throughout life! Perhaps I should add this to my library just to be on the safe side  A beautiful write as always, ~Krista  "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Ahh, Sweet One. Your thoughts are always reaching. I love this. A harsh truth with a gentle communication. only you... |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Palatable wisdom. -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
a creative way to explain the old adage well-woven with good rhythm and rhyme |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Ecellent write full of wisdom, how many wishes do we get? Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Logan Such magic you weaved with your words, as usual. I loved this piece. Take care....Sue Suetang |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!!Well said and filled with truth. I like it very much. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
So true! *smiles* Very well written, Logan... ~Tier |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'll have to take your word for the truth of this... and let you know if I agree if and whenever any of my wishes are fulfilled. *G* (But don't hold your breath... I've sworn off wishing! *G* Seriously... this is very well written, Logan... I enjoyed! |
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