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Shadows In The Mist
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Shadows In The Mist |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada 
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Shadows In The Mist The oceans are a necropolis For many shipwrecked souls Centuries of victims roam The margins of its shoals Densest clouds of fog conceal The vestige of their plight Spirits riding high wave’s crest Cloaked in brumous white Searching for their final rest A marker for their grave Something that tells the world They lie beneath the waves Through centuries they wander Undaunted they persist Doomed to roam the oceans Mere shadows in the mist Brian Beaudry |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
well! right from the first line I wanted to continue reading this. I enjoyed it very much!! snow "Trace my body with your words |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done... one to be proud of!! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi Brian, this is touching and well done. Makes me see the souls of the titanic, calling to not be forgotten. Sandra |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
brianbeaudry- Wonderful write...nicely done..  ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
good job Brian....loved it |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Well done Brian, this is a work of art. Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
beautifully done! I love it! Ohh..and did I say..  WELCOME BACK!  |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
very very nice...such misty thoughts beautifully woven really enjoyed the read |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
What a treat to find you here. Again you write the vision of your words with perfection. I LOVE IT. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! A sad but wonderfully written account of all the brave noble people who have sailed the great oceans in pursuit of adventure and freedom! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful! It is so great to see you're expanding your wonderful talent, dearest friend! I am so proud of you! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Perfectly reflective of lost ships and ghostly seas. This has always been an interest to me. You have written it hauntingly well. The words grip you to read! Sincerely, Rwood |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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