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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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0 posted 2001-07-20 02:48 PM



We kissed in desperation
searching for answers
Fearing in our hearts
this could be our last kiss goodbye
I know I can love you much better than this
if we only had the time
But I have to go
this summer romance
will be put on hold
I'll write you each day
and tell you how much I miss you
I'll wait for your letters
when the mailman arrives
We'll talk on the phone for hours
longing to be in each other's arms
Waiting for next summer
when we'll continue this romance.


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Cpat Hair
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Member Patricius
since 2001-06-05
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1 posted 2001-07-20 02:59 PM


ah the end of summer....

nice write Walker... I enjoyed the read

VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
2 posted 2001-07-20 03:08 PM


but, but, but...it's only mid-July! don't go, don't go summer...come back.....!!!!

oh, the agony of temporary moments

never had a summer romance, don't think I could have stood it!


SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet
3 posted 2001-07-20 03:10 PM


I know the pain of a long distance relationship so well....those last kisses certainly are full of emotion!  Great poem walker,
~Krista  

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."          
~Winnie

JLR
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since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785

4 posted 2001-07-21 12:15 PM


How well I know the romance of this...though so much can change in a year.  Again, you write love well!
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