Not worth the candle . . . VAS's challenge

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Open Poetry #15

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-07-20 01:38 PM

not worth the candle
let's put out the cat and sleep
snuff out the candle

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-07-20 05:49 PM

I don't know what the challenge was, but this is nice

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-07-20 05:58 PM

candle's wax off wick
lingers soft between fingers
darkness beckons us

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2001-07-20 06:28 PM

leave the candle lit
pass unwanted flame my way
inspiration burns

~vlraynes

Interloper-
Very nicely done..enjoyed..

hugs,
~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 07-20-2001).]

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2001-07-20 07:32 PM

Interloper...The feeling sad
the cat and candle out

what of love?

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